*IMPORTANT* RainbowClan Leader *IMPORTANT*

[Mystical]

Post your bios for your proposed RainbowClan leader here, including an example post. If nobody else auditions for a month after you posted your audition then you automatically win the position (unless Mystical wants you to correct something). If someone else posts within the time limit we will wait another month, and another, and another, until finally we reach the one month limit and nobody else auditions. Either that or judging will begin after five entries.

[silverfang]

( Work In Progress.. but feel free to comment anyways)

Name: Mistydream

Age: 36 moons

Gender:Female

Appearance: Mistydream is a jet black she-cat with piercing green eyes. Her fore-legs are muscular and strong, and her rear-legs are also well muscled. She has large paws that are patched with ginger fur. On the middle of her right fore-paw there is a small circle-like patch of dark ginger with another, smaller white patch of fur in the center. Her paw pads are a pinkish-grey which is sometimes criss-crossed with flecks of white and black. She has needle sharp claws that she likes to sharpen on rocks and fallen trees.

Mistydream's head is a bit longer than a normal cat's. She has a rectangle shaped muzzle. Her nose is black with a semi-circle of pink right where the nose starts along the muzzle. Her black fur fluffs out at the head-end base of her lower jaw and ruffled down the back of her neck a bit.

Mistydream's ears are large and shaped like triangles. The outer ear is a dark reddish-grey colour. Her ear fur is a brilliant silver that seems the sparkle in the sun for some reason, and it is considerably long but well clean and neat.

Mistydream's tail is a long black snake. It appears to be thin until the tail ends. The end of her tail smoothly brushes out into a fox tail-like shape and droops down a bit like a flower that had been start ing to wilt. She uses that tail to fan herself on hot days and, to issue orders and signify anger and excitement of course.

Personality: Even though young, she is a wise cat with a way of making clever decisions. whether it is making strong warriors stay at camp while young cats and elders are helped along an escape route to safety in a time of danger, or rationing out the fresh-kill pile evenly in times of need. Mistydream does need help at times, but she seldom makes mistakes when handling social and natural issues. She has a vicious attitude towards cats who disobey her over three times in a row. But other than this and her rage during battle, Mistydream is not too mean. She has a certain kindness towards the kits and apprentices of the clan. She describes them as little balls of energy. Furthermore, she is very affectionate towards toms who catch her eye in some way or another, but she is still looking.

History:
For the time when her mother and father were still in the clan, everything was quite normal for a young she-cat. Hawkrage was a ginger tom with white patches of fur. Cloudedbreeze was a black she-cat with green eyes.

About Hawkrage: Hawkrage had a huge fight about his brother allmost feeding Mistydream deathberries when she was a young apprentice. While Dusktooth denied Hawkrage's acusations about the incedent being intentional. So, being the sensitive cat he was, Dusktooth ran away. Abandoning everything.
Two days later, Hawkrage was feeling like a stone had dropped on him. He was ceaselessly thinking about how wrong he had been about his brother, so he grabbed a leaf of travelling herbs and ran after his brother.

So continues the race for forgiveness

Mate/crush: She has no crush or mate yet.

Clan: Rainbowclan

Lineage:
Mother: Cloudbreeze ( recently deceased of greencough)
Father: Hawkrage ( Left the clan in search of his brother who disappeared after a huge quarrel against each other)
No siblings.
Perhaps later, when I am allowed more characters, I will play as Hawkrage.


Picture: I will draw a picture of her on GIMP or an oekaki later as there are no pictures that descibe her.

Other: She has a fancy for mice and thrushes.

Roleplay Example:
Mistydream stretched luxuriously, warmth radiating peacefully around the cave from underground hot springs and the bodies of other cats. The large cave was so comfortable, but duty allways comes before sleep. So, yawning she padded out, not sure if her deputy was awake yet, and took out a very plump mouse from the fresh-kill pile.
The she-cat breathed in the sweet smell of newly growing things that always brung in the hopes of new kits to be born. For it was a great season to produce new bundles of life and introduce them to the world. Kits were beautiful creatures, as were other baby animals. Signifying a new generation of healthy, strong clan cats to take on the duties of the ones who passed away. To bring in new memories, new hopes and new love.
She watched as a young apprentice wrestled playfully with one of his denmates, remembering with a slight hint of envy at the youngsters, they still had a full life ahead of them. Mistydream had allready realised how short life can really be, so she sometimes wished that she was once more no more than a small kit in the nursury, caring not for anything exept for the joy and curiosity of finding and exploring new things.
With those few thoughts and her meal finished, Mistydream left to find her deputy and help organize patrols. The new day's sun shone on as if it were ushering all the clan cats to come slowly out of their warm cave with bright hearts, and to walk into the bright and very beautiful new-leaf day.

[Mystical]

There's no individule dens in RainbowClan.

The bio seems good so far, but in the roleplay sample some parts seem choppy and doesn't really flow that well. Can you fix that, please?

[silverfang]

I will try as best I can.

[Mystical]

The last two paragraphs still seem sort of choppy to me. There's too many periods, and not enough commas. Sorry if I seem picky, but I want all the high position cats to have good bios ^^

[silverfang]

That's okay. I pretty much fail anyways, especially during school year.

[Mystical]

It's good now =3 Don't worry, I'm sure you'll improve in no time.

[silverfang]

Hehe. My english teacher has been teaching us to use more periods, he hates run-on sentences. So that's probably where I keep using all the periods.

Thanks.

[Mystical]

Accepted.